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 纵观多年来国家四、六级英语作文鑫辉娱乐登录入口下载，考生作文成绩欠佳的主要原因除了准确性和连贯性差之外，语句软弱无力也是不容忽略的一个方面。因此在英语写作教学中，如何增强语句表现力的问题必须引起我们足够的重视，以提高学生写作的表达质量。为此，笔者结合自己的写作教学实践，针对该项技能的训练提出了一些切实可行的有效做法，供广大同仁和英语学习者参考借鉴。
        
        一、避免使用语意弱的"be"动词。
        1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
        Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
        Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
        Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定 语)
        2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
        1) Weak: The team members are good players.
        Revision: The team members play well.
        2) Weak: One worker’s plan is the elimination of tardiness.
        Revision: One worker’s plan eliminates tardiness.
        3、在以"here"或"there"开头的句子中，把"be"动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例 如：
        1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
        Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
        2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
        Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
        
        二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
        1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
        Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
        2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
        Better: She compares prices and quality.
        
        三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
        1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
        Better: Charity has supported the organization.
        2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
        Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.